This photo showed up in my Facebook feed a few days ago.
Ok...
So I appreciate the message behind this ad. Definitely some good things to think about. Also, I am NOT the model example of correct grammar and spelling. But seriously:
"After 3 Month Better the lung 30%" - WTF?!?!
"After 8 Hours Out Extra (CO) From Your Body" - I personally like to capitalize every word while simultaneously failing to make any sense, but the literary community has some different views. Also I think we may be blazing into some new territory with the verb 'out'. I guess that 'Extra (CO)' was in the closet somehow.
"After 12 Weeks Your lungs recover the ability clean itself" - So now "lungs" is singular. I guess I'm no expert on biology but I'm fairly sure that the human lungs aren't smushed together into a singular unit...
"After 1 Year Less than your risk of heart disease to half" - Um....hmmmm...............yup, nuff said.
Poll: How critical am I being?
(1) Not critical enough
(2) Just critical enough
(3) Way too critical
(4) Too Way Just Critical Enough
2 comments:
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Too critical.
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